Holly 'Kitty' Lotus [WIP]

[Feather]

Name: Holly Ann Lotus
Alias: Kitty
Age: 15
Gender: Female
Tribe: Cigarettes
Rank: Hunter
Term of Residence in New Pork: 6+ months
Political standing: Politics are boring. Let the stupid Prime Ministers and Presidents talk about whatever they want as long as I don't get involved.
Romantic orientation: Straight.
Marital status: What?
Nationality: Briton.
Birthplace: London, England.
Country of residence: Err...Here?
Occupation (pre-Plague): Student.
Weight: 105
Height: 5'3 Somewhere around there. Slightly smaller than the rest of the girls her age.
Eyes: Green
Hair: Black
Physical disabilities: Its not really a health disability. Its the way she looks. If anyone sees her striking emerald eyes they immedietly think of her cold hearted sister, ex leader of the Wildcats who killed many with ought reason. She wishes to be seen as Holly. NOT Kathryn.
Fears: Rats, Being caged, Death itself.
Likes: Cats, Thinking of her Family in a better place.
Dislikes: Vain people, slow reflexes, inability to communicate.
Addictions: Proving herself to the world, Coffee.
Favorite super-hero(es): Cat Woman.
Favorite color: It varies from day to day. Blue mostly.
Favorite food: Strawberries dipped in sugar. Fruit in general.
Family status: Out of a family of 18 or so she was one of the middle children.
Crime record: Theft, Grand Theft Auto.
Kills: 17. A couple in London, and the others were enemies of her tribe.
Habits: Being overly annoying and peppy.
One word to describe: Determined.
One quote to describe:

"I am not my sister! I am my own person! Look behind the eyes I share with her! I will be loyal to the Tribe and not the one my sister led! Give me a chance and think of what I have to offer! I am not Murder..."

Appearance:

Holly has a pixie like look. The Lotus family, reknowned for its fiery locks passed Holly much to the familys shock. She stood out in the family as the dark haired child, also unlike the females in her family she kept her ebony hair down to her shoulders, cropped so that it stuck out in different angles and points unlike the gentle waves of fire that her sisters had. Her frame is slim and graceful, it has muscle but she is more swift than strong. Her curves are evident as she matured from a child of only 14 to a young woman of 15 with curves and a chest that held something for once. Holly is known for her catty appearance as she slinks around New Pork. The tribe uses this to their advantage and often uses her as a spy rather than a scout. Her famous emerald green orbs are outlined with eyeliner to make the effect more striking. Her lashes are long and fan out around her eyes. She likes to wear the color black alot aswell. She wears a black tank top always, even during the winter.

Notable History:

She was always the outcast of the large family, having to look after the younger siblings. Jealousy seemed to fill her cheerful and beautiful eyes as she watched her older sister Kathryn fill their parents hearts to the brim. She lingered in the shadows during the Christmas where dearest Kathryn got her heart desires. A piano. And their parents and younger siblings sat around the piano as she played and sang her stupid heart out. She watched with disgust as her father would spin Kathryn around when she got home from school, how her tired mother would always smile the brightest at her and then snap at Holly. Holly grew sick of the overshadowing soon enough. Thoughts of jealousy were in her heart and head as she went out in th emiddle of the night and struck a match and left it on the carpet. Her eyes blazed as she walked outside calmly and fled into the night. Unsuspecting that the one she had tried to get rid of had also escaped.

Reputation:

Holly is known for being a livley character and having a deadly sister whom others put into their judgement of her. This drives her nuts of course.

Other:

Holly has an insane crush on Seraphim. But she knows that he loved Serenity and that vampire captive Dancer seemed to be grabbing his full attention. Holly can be an extremly jealous girl at points. Her heart break is driving her insane though.

[Masquerade]

[[ The 'physical disabilities' you have down right now = powerplay (as it's saying what other characters do). "She wears a black tank top always, even during the winter" = Frostbite, anyone? Her reputation is another powerplay, having it just say "Holly is known for being a livley character and having a deadly sister. This drives her nuts of course." would fix that.

Her "Other" stuff should just be dropped. Why? Because it's melodramatic crap :/ Pardon my bluntness.

I'm not staff, so you don't listen to anything I suggest, but I'm just trying to help :P]]

[Seraphim]

[*disintigrates into insane giggling* Crush... on Seraph... *chuckles*

*coughs* That's fine, but no one (including Seraphim,) currently knows that Dancer and Seraphim are 'an item', so that's kinda 'EH!? TELEPATH' and everything.

No personality? However, see seems like a happy, peppy person - seveteen kills? Characters like Mina, Sven, Seraphim and perhaps several Wildcats have figures that high, but Cigarettes are generally not murderers.

Has Occelot given you the okay to play her sister? I mean, s'fine with me, but I dunno what Mina will say. She's stricter than I am. ]

[Mina Crow]

[Seraph, Feather is Lady Diabla, Ocelot's player. And no, I did not give her permission to RP the sister. I would like to bury that character once and for all.]

[Seraphim]

[Mina Crow]

[Let's do this by parts.

Name will have to be changed, since she will not be Ocelot's sister. Also, due to the physical appearance of your character, this looks way too much like taking the character Holly from DC's Catwoman.

Marital status means whether you are single, commited, married, a widow...

Country of residence refers to before New Pork.

Physical disabilities - Er, no. First, you do not decide how other characters act toward yours. This is powerplaying. And second, she does not resemble her sister; with so many people in the world, why would they think of Ocelot, whom they might not even know? Lastly, this is not a physical disability, anyway, and therefore does not belong here.

Favorite super-hero(es) proves to my vision toward her name.

Family status; while there are numerous families, a 18-member family is pretty larger than most.

Crime record - how about the killing of her family? Since her History has to be changed, this will need adjustments.

Kills: Nevermind this, due to the necessary adjustments in History. But if she killed her family, what with their numbers? And Cigarettes are not too fond of killing.

Habits: This is a personality trait, not an habit.

One quote to describe Is this the overall view that your character projects to the world?

Appearance must suffer changes according to adjustments in History. Black hair is genetically impossible in a red-haired family. But let's go into the details. Your character is too perfect; in New Pork, there is shortage of clean water (even for the Cigarettes) and most facilities are unavailable. She cannot keep her 'pixie like look' forever, nor her haircut / hairdress. No eyeliner - who would waste time looking for it? A black tank top, in the winter? She'd freeze. Also, in New Pork, what is the difference between a spy and a scout? It's the exact same thing.

Personality is required.

Notable History will need a lot of changes. She is not Ocelot's sister. And please, drop the outcast mood. Why would she be the family's outcast? I find no reason for it. We need history after she left her home, too.

Reputation will need changes, since she is not Ocelot's relative. And there is no telling about how others' characters reacts to yours.

Other - starting with no one knowing (not even themselves) that Seraphim and Dancer are, to quote Seraph, 'an item', this sounds just as a pretext to have a moanig, heartbroken character. To be frank, drop it. If you really want to go through with it, do so IC, not on your bio. Don't forget that in character actions lead to in character consequences, though.]